I just played the demo and I really see a lot of potential in it. I think the plot is pretty interesting with the GGY thing and the glitches. I'm really looking forward to this project continuing ^^
Now I'd like to give you some advice to improve the game:
-I know it's a lot to ask but giving Cassie's father a design drawing would be a big plus because I think it would add more immersion to the game
-Second, I think the game is going at a very rushed pace, or at least that's how I feel a little (maybe doing a bit more of the beginning part with Cassie and Roxanne will help give it a calmer pace)
With that said I really see a future for the project. I hope people who play the demo think something similar and this demo becomes a much bigger game <3
Lastly, how did you make the game? I find visual novels very interesting and maybe, just maybe, one day I'll make a fangame like you. Clearly saying that you have been my inspiration since you really have been and now I want to make my own visual novel.
Any advice?
For now, nothing more. I wish you the best of luck with the reception of the demo and I hope it is a success <3
The first bit is fast yeah, we also noticed that one, and the other parts are not I can assure you. Cassie's dad is a secret for a reason. I am using Ren'py for my visual novels and I would be glad to help with them in the future!!
I mean I can but I am really really busy with everything since I'm an art student, I can only give resources and help with some issues and questions, show where to start.
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it has roxanne wolf, 10/10. I see a lot of potential on this project, please don't give up.
conclusion: keep cooking lil bro!! PS: ily
Hi! ^^
I just played the demo and I really see a lot of potential in it. I think the plot is pretty interesting with the GGY thing and the glitches. I'm really looking forward to this project continuing ^^
Now I'd like to give you some advice to improve the game:
-I know it's a lot to ask but giving Cassie's father a design drawing would be a big plus because I think it would add more immersion to the game
-Second, I think the game is going at a very rushed pace, or at least that's how I feel a little (maybe doing a bit more of the beginning part with Cassie and Roxanne will help give it a calmer pace)
With that said I really see a future for the project. I hope people who play the demo think something similar and this demo becomes a much bigger game <3
Lastly, how did you make the game? I find visual novels very interesting and maybe, just maybe, one day I'll make a fangame like you. Clearly saying that you have been my inspiration since you really have been and now I want to make my own visual novel.
Any advice?
For now, nothing more. I wish you the best of luck with the reception of the demo and I hope it is a success <3
The first bit is fast yeah, we also noticed that one, and the other parts are not I can assure you. Cassie's dad is a secret for a reason. I am using Ren'py for my visual novels and I would be glad to help with them in the future!!
First, I'm glad the pace in the next parts is slower ^^
Second, I didn't expect Cassie's father to be a secret :0
I'm really looking forward to seeing why ;)
Third, did you just say you'd like to help me make my own visual novel?
I mean I can but I am really really busy with everything since I'm an art student, I can only give resources and help with some issues and questions, show where to start.
Don't worry ^^
Any kind of help, no matter how small, will be greatly appreciated ;)
Studying comes first ^^
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